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RE: New Story - again written exclusively on Steemit - WiP - Bouncer Part 28

in #writing7 years ago

The character of Taylor is really attractive. The zack's meeting with contenders is really interesting. I really enjoyed the conversation among them. and at the end I really like the joe's dialogue "Only five? Well count me twice then"
Thanks for this beautiful story.