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RE: The Water World - Tell a Story to Me
Your story is filled with such great details, like the soil as currency and the interactions between the shopkeeper and the boys. They give a good picture of life in this alternate (I hope) future outside the frame of the story.
Thank you, I know that I'm losing that level of detail as I advance in my story, sometimes I do not have enough time I would like to write and I end up accelerating things, I'm sorry for that, but no doubt I will improve that later.
Thank you very much for taking the time to read and comment.
Running out of time/space is a perpetual problem with these prompts - you still did a great job with it. I start so many freewrites and finish the stories and then realize I'm setting up a whole book and need to cut everything!
I know how that feels.