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RE: All That Disturbs Our Peace

in #poetry7 years ago

I came in here planning on providing a full critique, but there is very, very little I would change. The only issue I have is that "There is no strangeness" is a little redundant considering you've already said you're familiar. Otherwise, this poem is incredible as is.

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thanks, Matt - you're right, the line's redundant - repetition for emphasis? lol

Haha! That's a good enough defense for me.