A Writter's Dilemma (Original Works)

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A Writer's Dilemma

I love to write her name,
On every poems and lines,
In hope for her,
To finally be mine.

I love to write her name,
Spelled with utmost attention,
In hope for her,
To realize my affection.

And I love to write her name,
Though my days are blue,
In hope for her,
To have a clue.

But I know,
This page might be teared,
And this ink will dry,
Yet I will still write your name,
In hope for me — to know your answer.

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By Adam Luqman (original works)

Sometimes in life, we tend to believe something is true just because we are entitled to the thing. And one sided opinion is always unfortunate at the of the day


Art of poetry is beautiful yet undervalued.

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Thank you kind sir. Kinda new to this site :)

You earned a new follower :p

Why, thank You :) Generally, I've seen people tagging this bot and it automatically confirms that your work is indeed original. Your poetry has some potential imo. It refers to a common reason behind starting to write (the other half) and I was able to understand it, lol.

Thank you for your comment. And yes, as what you indicated, it is true regarding the common reason thingie. Oh if possible, might show me around how this websites works and what dos and donts people usually need to be aware of? "Steemit Tourist Guide", lol

Well, I'm still quite new myself :p I see Your introduction post haven't had much of an impact, I'd suggest to go to the new or early (a few hours) trending posts and find some followers there.

Your posts/comments should be meaningful, related to the topic. You definitely shouldn't write short messages like 'good post' or ask for upvotes or followers, it might get You flagged. Self-upvoting yourself is a controversial move but most people don't perceive it as a bad behaviour for minnows (minnows = small players like You or me, single upvote doesn't yield more than ~0.40$). When posting something, You should go 50/50 since SBD (Steem Backed Dollar) is now more expensive than normal STEEM and it's easily exchangeable for aforementioned SBD. The rest You can find on FAQ alongside with the links provided there. If You have any specific questions, don't hesitate to ask :)

Alright. I'll try to re-do my introduction. Is it okay if I just edit my prior Introduction? And thank you for your comment and help :)

Everything stays in the blockchain forever so anyone can view edited/deleted messages. Not that it matters right now, improving Your introduction is absolutely okay :) You won't get that much visibility since the post's age won't change but at least Your future followers will learn more about You.

Hi fellow Malaysian poet! :)

Hi hi hahaha. Rasa awkward type Melayu kat sini 😂

Your poem is gooooooddd 👏

Thank you 🙂

@adamlqmn I like "Ori" work. #kipidap :)

Proud to be Malaysian, even though I live between 2 countries.

Thank you :) oh I see. Nah it's fine its now where you live it's the spirit inside that matters :p