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RE: A meagre forest folio

in #nature7 years ago

Wow this is amazing, in face I saw that this one clearly made mention ofvtje human anatomy, maybe the ending of a life.

An antique album
Of mind albumen
Holding photographs
Of figures ghastly,
The receptacle of
The sadness of time
And its transmutation.

It was like you referred to as accident here, very gory and painful, the words convey it in a very subtle way,
It's amazing, the imageries towards the end is celestial, quite amazing, very precise on a free verse, this is amazing.