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RE: Steemit Engagement Challenge temporada 2 (Semana 4)| El peor y el mejor dia de mi vida, una historia real por @devi2021

in SteemAlive2 years ago

Good to read your entry friend.It is painful to hear the demise of your niece,Emma and sis.Be consoled.Your happiest day was the birth of your child.Thats very wonderful.Children are the inheritance of the Lord and the fruit of the womb is reward.It is important to split your work into paragraphs.

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Thanks for your recommendations I felt the paragraphs were too long at the end but I had no pictures to make it look a little better, I will make it better next time

My best regards

 2 years ago 

Alright.I am glad you understand he importance of the correction.You can still use the ENTER button of your device to split your work even when you dont have many pictures.